DjBirdMav's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[CMB - Dubbernaut in spaec]

Amazing

I am starting to love your stuff, I already know this loop is going to be stuck in my head. Thanks for that I guess lol.

cheesemonkeybill responds:

mwahahahahaaa......

[-MiB!-RandomDanceOfHappyn]

Very well put together

I like the build up around 40 seconds and the drum beat breakdown around one minute is impeccable and the progressions around 1min 30 is also well put together and timed well with the song, overall very good for your fist song, Kinda jealous ^_^. 2 min onwards is amazing.

RandomDanceOfHappy responds:

thanks lots :) i had alot more changed to this song and stuff but my comp crashed and lost everything o well start from scratH!

[Slip (Deadmau5 Dubstep Remix)]

Very good start, needs a bit of tweaking

From 30 seconds on it's amazing, for the first 30 seconds there's a bit too big of a contrast between the two melodies, you should either lower one or higher the other and you've got yourself a great intro, it's all about the intro to grab the listener's attention and the rest of your song has the substance to keep them interested. I hear the difference in contrast at 1 min 40, the background synth at around 1:50 to 2:20 is amazing though. Definitely consider this a very good dubstep mix though.

KayShot responds:

Thanks Bro. I'm Not Really Used To Dubstep. I agree i need to get used to the organization.
This is actually my first.
I'll definately rework the intro for the final version.

[cmb - tehdubzorxx]

OMG I love this

Electronic reggae now here is a new genre all together, definitely work on this make it longer !!!!

cheesemonkeybill responds:

word. i plan on making more dub, don't worry.

[intervaginal asphyxiation]

Good start.

I like where you're heading with this, I would up the bassline maybe half an octave or a full octave and mess with the noise gate and feedback to synthesize it a bit more and you'll have yourself a great loop.

cheesemonkeybill responds:

lolz
wot bassline?
its all one synth baby, i really didn't feel like fucking with anything more than that.
and i find it odd that you suggested raising something "half an octave" since that would technically be a diminished 5th (if your counting by halfsteps) and that's just weird as hell if your nerdy like me.